You are going slow,
I am patiently waiting,
Are you debating
With what I sow.
You were appeasing
With how you did glow,
Appreciating my flow
Of poetic rhyming.
I was mentally unwell,
While I was with you,
But now I am sane.
We were suffering a spell
Of feeling mentally blue
But had loving to gain.
© Andrew Stevenson 26/09/2017
An English sonnet with a specific rhyming scheme.
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Wow, I can't comment
ReplyDeleteas quickly as you turn out a sonnet!
The first two summarizing lines
tell the story as you wait for loving signs.
Thank you for your kind words. I learnt this type of sonnet from Martin. I might try some more! Love love, Andrew. Bye.
DeleteAn excellent post Andrew, the message coming across.
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Thank you for thinking so. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
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