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Tuesday 26 September 2017

A Debate I Might Hate

You are going slow,
I am patiently waiting,
Are you debating
With what I sow.
You were appeasing
With how you did glow,
Appreciating my flow
Of poetic rhyming.

I was mentally unwell,
While I was with you,
But now I am sane.

We were suffering a spell
Of feeling mentally blue
But had loving to gain.


© Andrew Stevenson 26/09/2017

An English sonnet with a specific rhyming scheme.

Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.

4 comments:

  1. Wow, I can't comment
    as quickly as you turn out a sonnet!
    The first two summarizing lines
    tell the story as you wait for loving signs.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words. I learnt this type of sonnet from Martin. I might try some more! Love love, Andrew. Bye.

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  2. An excellent post Andrew, the message coming across.

    Yvonne.

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