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Inga took a step closer, carefully placing his barefoot on the undergrowth, which remained silent. He now felt in range to release his spear from his firing position; the spear flew with deadly intent and reached its unsuspecting target within seconds. The target yelped and fell to the ground, seriously wounded by the shot. Inga sprang forward, then sprinted to his fallen quarry.
Inga took a step closer, carefully placing his barefoot on the undergrowth, which remained silent. He now felt in range to release his spear from his firing position; the spear flew with deadly intent and reached its unsuspecting target within seconds. The target yelped and fell to the ground, seriously wounded by the shot. Inga sprang forward, then sprinted to his fallen quarry.
His prey, upon hearing this advancement, fearfully struggled to its feet
to make haste a possible escape: the spear dangled from its hind-quarters
dragging on the ground as it speedily ran. Inga was in hot pursuit, thinking
fast on his feet as he navigated the trees and forest floor at speed. His prey
quickly made some ground on him, but then its injury began to take a hold, and
it rapidly slowed. It tried in vain to keep on running, but not even its fear
could muster the incapacitated limb to respond! It finally fell, and gasped for
breath as it waited its fate!
It was in a clearing, and soon the beaming sun shining over it darkened
into Inga’s shadow, then into Inga himself. It frightfully stared up at Inga,
and was surprised to see an expression of grievance upon his face! Inga felt
sorrow for the animal, and his eyes welled up with tears as he searched for a
suitable rock! After some rummaging through the grass, he found what he was
looking for, then returned to his prey. He knelt on the ground beside it, then
stroked its soft, warm neck as he sighed. Inga chanted a prayer:
‘I pray, oh sun god, hear I. Thank you food for tribe.’
When he was finished, he lifted the rock above him with both hands, then
smashed it down into the creatures head; blood splashed out of the pierced
skull. Inga briefly looked away from the horror of it all, then chanted another
prayer:
‘I pray, oh sun god, hear I. I am a warrior of the Ashanti tribe. Inga
kill deer, take spirit of deer!’
Shortly after, he felt blood begin to soak his knees, so he finished his
prayer and stood up. He stooped down to dip his finger in the blood, then drew a
circle on each cheek representing the sun and moon.
‘I pray, oh sun god, hear I. Protect I. Keep I warm with your heat.
Guide I with your light.’
He pulled out his spear, then scanned the clearing and forest for any
possible signs of danger! A patch of tall grass to his left caught his
attention moving, but it was just swaying in a breeze. He liked the butterflies
that danced above it, and the array of designs and colours they had on display.
Flies were beginning to irritate him, attracted by the dead body: he swiped at
them, stunning one with a smack that sent it hurtling to the ground: Inga
quickly stamped on it. He picked up the deer by its two back feet, then set on
his way, dragging the body behind him.
Before long he picked up the trail that had brought him to this
particular hunting ground, a stream that would lead him to a river, which would
lead him to his village. He stepped into it, shuddering at first at its chill,
then to appreciate its coolness as the heat of the day flared. He dropped the
body, which briefly coloured the flowing water red, then placed his spear on
the embankment. Inga sat on his haunches, then cupped his hands together to
drink from the refreshing water. He stood up, scanned the area around him, then
set off downstream with the deer in tow.
A roaming sabre tooth tiger picked up a scent of blood, which lured him
to the spot of Inga’s kill. It was hungry, and desperate for a meal! It sniffed
about, and scented droplets of human sweat, which caused it to instantly check
the immediate vicinity! It licked up what blood it could, lapping up dirt and
grass in the process, then swiftly and stealthily followed the trail of blood.
It came to a halt at the stream, losing the scent. It sniffed the air for
possible signs, but could find no traces of Inga and the deer within the breeze
that was blowing down the valley. It lapped up a hearty drink, then searched
the area for any possible traces. Moments later it traced a faint scent of
blood where the spear had been, reasoning then took it downstream!
Further downstream, Inga stopped for a rest. He drank until his thirst
was quenched, then washed the sweat off his brow, that had been irritably
dripping over his eyes. He sat down on the grassy embankment, then massaged his
arms to alleviate some of the aching. He took in the natural beauty before him:
the glory of the sun shining through the open canopy above the stream,
reflecting its bright light on its surface; the splendor of the array of trees,
proud in stance and bloom; the beauty of the flowers, rich in various types of
colour; the wonder of nature, with birds darting to and thro, butterflies
floating here and there, and insects going from A to B; the majestic sight of
the surrounding peaks, encompassing the valley where he lived.
Two little birds squabbling caught his attention. He watched them madly
chirping while attempting to peck each other, while frantically flapping their
wings for flight and defense! He looked on intrigued at who might come out the
victor, and before long one flew away with the other chasing behind. He
reasoned they were probably siblings, at odds with each other from the nest.
A toad suddenly startled him, croaking wildly next to him. He marveled
at such a little creature being so brave, or stupid, in the face of
overwhelming adversity. He poked a cautious finger at it, saying:
‘You’re little, I’m big. You’re brave, I’m brave. You sit there, I sit
here. Am I in your way?’ Inga laughed at his last comment, then felt a little
stupid himself for talking to creatures, but carried on regardless, ‘is this
your territory and I’m sitting in it?’ He laughed again, then composed himself
before saying, ‘I’m leaving now, toad win fight,’ he burst into an almighty fit
of laughter at the thought of a mere toad getting the better of him,
Inga, a brave warrior of the Ashanti tribe!
Inga rose, then bent down near the water to rinse his hair, catching a
glimpse of his reflection before he did so: black, unkempt hair; tanned,
Caucasian skin; deep brown eyes; proud nose and a small mouth protruding
through a short beard. He brushed his hands through his wet hair, which made
him feel a little better. He lifted the flap of his animal hide undergarment,
then urinated on the embankment.
He looked at the toad once again, proudly sitting there watching him,
then slowly prodded it with his spear, causing it to jump a short distance.
Inga mischievously waved the spear in front of the stubborn toads face!
‘Toad brave and toad stupid! I’ve got a spear,’ Inga stated as he
carefully pushed the toad aside, ‘I win fight now,’ he said with a victorious
grin. Inga proudly displayed his chest to the toad, flexing it so it bulged!
‘Toad got big chest, I’ve got big chest. My chest bigger than toad’s!’
Inga picked up the deer, then paused as he took in the canopy of trees
that led down the valley for miles. His thoughts drifted to his village, and he
envisaged his beautiful girlfriend anxiously waiting for him. A sneeze brought
him back around to the matter at hand!
‘Bye toad. Live long life,’ Inga hopefully said as he set on his way,
but was doubtful with such stupidity!
Sometime later, the tiger caught the scent of Inga’s urine, then
followed this to where he had urinated. It saw the toad, then instantly pounced
on it, biting it in two with his teeth, a little appetizer to appease its
hunger! It searched for traces of the deer, but could find no scent of it! It
quickly set off back downstream, hoping for a bigger meal soon!
Inga was making steady progress, prompted by the need to get back to the
village before nightfall. His arm ached, so he stopped to use the other one to
drag the carcass. He scanned the area behind him, then set off on his way
again. A little further down the trail he came to an abrupt halt, having heard
a rustling sound coming from the bushes to his left. Inga carefully placed the
deer down into the water, took hold of his spear in both hands, then held it
defensively out before him. He stood there, paused in motion, intently watching
and listening! After what seemed an age, he heard the sound again. Inga stood
there, waiting in a paradoxical state, brave and fearful as to what might
ensue!
Moments later a rabbit peered out from under it, saw Inga, then darted
back for cover. Inga breathed a sigh of relief, then relaxed from his defensive
stance. He suddenly heard splashing footsteps behind him, and was instantly
alarmed! Inga quickly turned to face the threat, and was horrified to see a
sabre tooth tiger rapidly advancing upon him. He froze, and seemed suspended in
time as his mind raced for a resolution!
Seconds later, he quickly searched for a tree to scale, but there
wouldn’t be time! The tiger, upon seeing the weapon, abruptly slowed down its
pace to approach with more caution. Inga slowly retreated, taking cautious
steps backwards to remain facing the beast. It roared an almighty growl that
shook Inga to his very core! Inga stared at the beast’s jaws, open wide
revealing its long teeth, and was petrified!
He took a few more steps backwards, in the positive direction of a tree
he could climb. He stabbed the space before him with the spear, in the vain
hope of warding the tiger off! It came upon him and swiped viciously at the
weapon. Inga wildly stabbed at its giant paws, connecting with one: the tiger
roared in pain, then backed off a little. Inga took a few more steps backwards,
getting ever closer to the safety of the trees!
The tiger limped towards him, still a formidable and frightening sight!
Inga despairingly glanced at the trees, so near yet so far, and wondered
whether he should now make a run for it before it was too late? The tiger came
upon him again, growling viciously, then snapping its jaws at the weapon
threatening it; Inga seized his chance, and thrust the spear into the beast’s
mouth, piercing its throat. The tiger roared in pain, then swiped at the spear,
forcing it out of Inga’s hands! Inga was mortified at finding himself without a
weapon, and instantly sprinted for the nearest tree he could scale!
The tiger frantically swiped at the spear, eventually dislodging it from
its throat, then immediately sprinted after Inga, who was now nestled safely up
an oak tree. It leapt up the trunk, sinking its claws into the bark for grip.
Inga’s heart sank in despair as the beast climbed up the tree, and he prepared
himself for the worst when the beasts grip suddenly gave way, dropping it on
its hind legs back on the ground. Inga was extremely relieved, yet nervously
watched the magnificent beast prowling about below him.
Soon thereafter the tiger left for the stream, desperate to quench the
thirst that the injury was now inflicting upon it. Inga watched it lapping up
gulps of water, and wondered how long he might have to spend up the tree -
perhaps all night! The tiger felt faint, so it searched for a suitable spot to
lay down that offered some cover. Inga watched the tiger seemingly go to sleep,
and wondered if he was dead or not? He dare not venture down at this moment in
time, in case the beast stirred and attacked him!
An hour passed before Inga finally plucked up the courage to climb down
to the ground. He quickly retrieved his spear, then slowly approached the
creature, ever mindful to be cautious. He trod on a stone, picked it up, then
hurled it at the animal, hitting it in its side: the tiger never flinched, so
Inga advanced some more, then stood motionless for a long duration, taking in
its majestic appearance! Inga reasoned it was a fully grown male by its huge
size. He was close enough to see the tiger wasn’t breathing, yet still
approached it with caution! He prodded the lifeless body with his spear, just
to be sure!
Inga breathed a huge sigh of relief, and relaxed a little, yet felt
mentally exhausted by the ordeal! He strolled over to the stream and drank a
much needed drink! He returned to the tiger, curious to examine it! He stroked
its fur, felt its muscles, then opened its jaws to get a good look at its
ferocious teeth. He felt proud and brave to have killed such a formidable
opponent, and was eager to tell his chief, partner and fellow tribesmen! Inga
knelt beside the creature, still in awe at its huge size!
‘I pray, oh sun god, hear I. I’m a warrior of Ashanti tribe. I’ve killed
a tooth tiger, take spirit of tooth tiger! Thank you food for tribe.’
Inga reached the river just before sunset, and was in awe at the powers
of the sun god, as the sky was ablaze with glorious shades of red and gold,
which captivated his attention for a duration! He strode on, taking in the
mighty, wide river as he did so: it was a force to be reckoned with, and from
Inga’s perspective, flowed with murderous intent, as it was quick to sweep away
any unsuspecting villager caught in its fast flowing currents! He watched a
fallen tree floating by in its grasp, and admired the strength of the water to
lift such a weight. He liked the daffodils that littered the footpath along the
way, appreciating their beauty.
Before long it became dark, and Inga struggled to see ten meters ahead
of him in the dim moonlight, which was a cause of concern, as any curious
predators could be upon him in an instant, catching him unawares! He raised his
spear as a defense mechanism, and listened intently, disregarding the dragging
sound the deer made! Inga caught sight of the moon in the river, then gazed up
in wonder at his god, which prompted him to say a quiet prayer:
‘I pray, oh moon god, hear I. Thank you I can see in the dark. Please
don’t fall on me!’
Sometime later, Inga caught site of plumes of smoke in the distance,
rising in the night sky, and new he was close to his village. He passed a long
bend next to the river, then saw fire light glowing within the village
enclosure, a fortress of posts. He crossed over a large clearing before coming
to a halt before the entrance.
‘LET INGA IN,’ he shouted over the tall fence.
While he waited he took pride in the engineering feat of their fortress,
and marveled at its construction!
A brief screeching sound coming from the forest startled him, and he
stared in vain at finding any possible source! Moths began to irritate him,
flying recklessly in his face! He heard voices, then two posts were lifted
before him by two of his fellow tribesmen.
‘You’re stupid walking in the dark,’ Col stated as Inga passed through
the entrance, ‘we pray to moon god to guide you and keep you safe!’
‘I’m a brave warrior,’ Inga called back to Col, who was replacing one of
the posts, ‘got great story to tell!’
Inga rushed through the village, passing many huts, until he came to a
clearing in its center, where a large fire raged, illuminating many villagers
around it and the surrounding area. He slowed down, telling everyone he passed
that he had a great story to tell. Just after the fire, he arrived at the chieftain’s
hut. He dropped the carcass on the dusty ground, then eagerly shouted:
‘CHIEF MANBULA, INGA BRAVE WARRIOR, GOT GREAT STORY TO TELL!’
Moments later the animal hide flap covering the short doorway was pulled
aside, then out stepped chief Manbula, looking majestic wearing a lion’s mane
around his neck!
‘Inga, Inga, Inga,’ Manbula repeated, ‘we worry, you’re late! Many pray
to moon god for you!’
‘I’ve killed a deer for tribe. Got great story to tell!’
The chieftain looked at the deer, then at the gathering that was
accumulating behind Inga, then said:
‘I thank you for tribe for deer to eat, you’re a skilled hunter. Tribe
proud, chief proud, you be proud!’
‘I am proud,’ Inga stated as he stood as proud as he could before adding,
‘I killed a tooth tiger!’
Many in the crowd gasped, shocked at such a revelation, particularly
Shy, Inga’s pregnant partner!
‘You’ve got great story to tell then,’ Manbula agreed, ‘you’ve killed
tooth tiger story. Please, tell story.’
Shy pushed through the crowd to reach the front, keen herself to hear
Inga’s story. Inga turned to face the gathering, caught site of her, then gazed
transfixed at her beauty: black, straight hair; brown eyes that sparkled
intellect; a sharp, petite nose and luscious, pout lips. He felt a deep love
for her, and the goose bumps he felt played with his heart strings. She became
conscientious that everyone was staring, and felt a little uncomfortable!
Shy eventually averted Inga’s gaze by turning her head, and as she did
so, smudged, damp tears reflected a little fire light from off her left cheek.
Inga noticed it, stepped towards her, then gently touched her cheek while
whispering:
‘Why you cry?’
She faced him, stupefied as to what to say!
‘Why you cry?’ Inga persisted, then added, ‘Is it because I’ve been in
the dark a long time?‘
‘Yes,’ she finally uttered after few moments thinking, not really
wanting to lie, but agreeing for his benefit! She instantly felt ashamed, and
kissed him to hide her blushing cheeks, a revealing tell! After composing
herself, Shy withdrew from him, conscious the crowd was waiting to hear what
Inga had to say, and grabbed his arm to usher him back towards the chief!
‘Go and tell your story now,’ she prompted.
Inga dramatically told his story, re-enacting the scenes, playing
himself and the tiger, and using the spear as a prop! The crowd loved his
showmanship, and he lapped up their enthusiasm. When he was finished, he turned
to the chief, threw down his spear next to the deer, then beat his chest not
dissimilar to a male gorilla!
‘I’M A BRAVE WARRIOR FOR CHIEF AND TRIBE,’ Inga shouted, then flexed his
torso, particularly his biceps!
The females amongst the crowd advanced upon him, each one touching him
for luck, as was customary. Inga liked the feeling of all the hands feeling
him, and expressed this in his smile, which seemed fixed to his face! Shy
waited until all the females were spent, then proudly walked over to him. As she
seductively moved her hand over his muscles, she could feel them bulging with
strength! Inga relaxed, wrapped his arms around her, then gently kissed her
cheeks where the smudged tears had been. He moved to her lips, then
passionately kissed her. Moments later, Shy whispered:
‘You’re Shy’s brave warrior.’
‘I’ll protect you and the baby,‘ he stated as he lovingly caressed her
large stomach.
Shy looked down at his hands with a great sorrow, as she needed
protection sometimes when Inga wasn’t around, but dare not ask for it, for fear
of the possible consequences! The baby suddenly kicked inside her; distracting
her from her thoughts! Shy put her hands over Inga’s and smiled as she gazed
into the depths of his eyes! Inga reciprocated, and for a few moments they were
lost in each other, oblivious to their surroundings! Shy eventually spoke:
‘I’m proud you’re father of our baby, you’ll make great father!’
‘I’m proud Shy mother of baby, Shy make great …’
‘INGA,’ Manbula called, interrupting him from his conversation with Shy,
’COME OVER HERE.’
Inga turned to face Chief Manbula, who was beckoning him to come over.
Inga took Shy’s hand to lead her towards the chief with him, but Shy resisted,
saying:
‘I‘ll go and rest at our hut.’
‘Come with I, Chief Manbula proud of me.’
‘You go, I‘ll go and rest,’ she repeated as she adamantly backed off
from him.
Inga held her hand as their arms outstretched, desiring her to stay with
him, then after she yanked it slightly, he reluctantly yielded, and released
his grip.
‘Go and rest then,’ Inga called after her as she headed away, ‘I’ll try
not to be too long.’
Inga strode over to Chief Manbula, who had his own little gathering,
seemingly all keen to share Inga’s company!
‘Inga, sit there next to Shirl,’ Manbula stated while gesturing with his
hand towards his daughter sitting on a large log, ‘rest yourself as you must be
tired from your long trek?’
‘And hungry,’ Shirl conscientiously added as Inga sat down, ‘I’ll fetch
our brave warrior some food to fill his hungry belly,’ she added as she stood
up, playfully scuffing his hair!
‘Thank you,’ Inga responded, appreciating her thoughtfulness, and liking
her playfulness, ‘I do feel tired and hungry,’ he added as he gazed up at her
staring down at him.
She stood there for a moment, looking intently into his eyes, searching
for any reciprocal feelings that might be expressed there!
‘SHIRL,’ Manbula shouted, annoyed at her stalling, ‘be on your way!’
She felt a little embarrassed at being reprimanded, and promptly set off
to hide her blushes!
‘Inga, how big was this tooth tiger again?’ Manbula enquired as he
walked towards Inga.
Inga looked up with the utmost respect at the chief approaching him, a large
framed man with a bulging stomach, and humorously stated for all to hear:
‘I see chief got big belly this summer!’
‘Chief store it up inside for winter,’ Manbula stated as he stood before
Inga, ‘and you’re too thin,’ he added as he poked Inga’s slim stomach.
‘You’re like a big bear,’ Inga seriously stated, ‘thin in spring, then
large in autumn.’
‘And he sleeps like big bear in winter,’ the chieftain’s partner, Saybe,
quipped.
‘I’m ferocious like big bear,’ Manbula stated as he mimicked a bear swiping
its claws, ‘ROAR!’
‘Inga will save us from that ferocious bear,’ Saybe stated, playfully
mocking her partner as she squeezed her granddaughter, Becky, in a protective
embrace!
‘Save us Inga,’ Becky called as the chief advanced upon her growling and
swiping!
Inga sprang up, raced to his spear, then picked it up, holding it
defensively out before him, saying:
‘Hey, big ferocious bear, leave females alone, come fight with Inga!’
‘ROAR, who is Inga?’
‘I’m a brave warrior of Ashanti tribe,’ he proudly stated as he flexed
his upper torso to show off his muscles, ‘who is bear?’
‘Bear brave warrior of forest,’ Manbula responded, showing off his
muscles too, ’bear is bigger than you!’
‘You are bigger than me,’ he agreed, ’but I’m a brave warrior of
forest too, and I’m cleverer than you!’
‘That may be so,’ Manbula agreed, ’but I got big claws that will scratch
you, and big teeth that will bite you,’ he added as he swiped the air and
growled, showing off his teeth!
‘That may be so,’ Inga acknowledged, ‘but I got sharp spear that will
stab you in your big, fat belly,’ he added as he prodded the air with the
spear!
‘Bear got big, fat belly because I eat lots of meat,’ Manbula stated,
‘you’re meat, I’ll eat you,’ he added as he approached Inga while repeatedly
swiping the air with both hands.
‘Get down on your hands and knees,’ Saybe interjected on Inga’s behalf.
The chief stopped, then turned to face her with a contorted expression
of grievance upon his countenance, while sternly placing his hands on his hips,
then stared at her for a short duration, dumbfounded by her playful mockery, as
she knew he wouldn’t like to get on his hands and knees! Saybe, not fazed by
his actions, as she was well used to this type of behavior, calmly stared back
until he eventually spoke:
‘Woman, do you have to interfere so much, bears can also stand up you
know!’
Suddenly, from out of the darkness, appeared Fist, Chief Manbula’s only
son: dancing firelight eerily illuminated him as he approached the gathering.
‘That may be so father,’ Fist agreed, ‘but bears don’t walk on
two legs,’ he added in a confident voice with an air of authority as he stood
in front of the group.
‘Have you been watching us from the darkness?’ Manbula questioned Fist,
‘like a predator stalking its prey!’
‘No chief, like a son admiring his father,’ Fist sarcastically lied as
he patted his father on the back.
‘Sit down then,’ Manbula barked at Fist, ‘you’re in the way standing
there like a tree!’
Fist stared long and hard at his father with a contemptuous glare, then
as an act of defiance, turned to face Becky with his arms outstretched.
‘Come to father, daughter,’ Fist said as he gestured with his hands,
beckoning her to him.
Becky slipped from her grandmother’s embrace, then ran towards her
father with open arms. Fist picked her up from under her arms, then playfully
launched her high up into the air.
‘FIST,’ Saybe called, alarmed at how high her granddaughter had been
thrown, ’that’s too high,’ she sharply added as Fist safely caught her.
Fist lovingly wrapped her in his arms, then held her tight as he span
her around at speed: Becky giggled, enjoying the ride! He came to a stop, then
stated to his mother:
‘Mother, you worry too much, Becky enjoys it!’
Fist glanced over at his father, who looked enraged and seemingly ready
to erupt, and chose not to push him any further, so he went and casually sat
down next to his mother with Becky sitting on his lap.
Chief Manbula stared after Fist seething, not appreciating his
insolence, especially while they were in the company of others! After a few
moments of composing himself, his frustration and anger subsided, leaving him
once again to step into the character of the bear.
‘ROAR,’ Manbula growled at Inga, ‘I will eat you for my hunger!’
‘I’ll keep warm in winter with your fur coat,’ Inga responded as he
slowly advanced upon Chief Manbula.
‘Put your spear down,’ Manbula said as Inga prodded the air in front of
him, ‘and fight like a bear,’ he added as he swiped at the spear!
‘But I’m not a bear,’ Inga stated as he circled Chief Manbula, keeping
him at bay by constantly stabbing at the space before him, waiting for an
opportunity to strike!
‘I’m going to stab your big, fat belly now with my spear, and kill you
dead!’
‘You can try,’ Manbula stated as he defensively backed off a little.
Inga pushed forward, driving Chief Manbula backwards, towards those who
were seated! Seconds later, Fist realized that his oath of a father would soon
back into him and Becky, so quickly stood up, placing Becky down on the ground,
then defensively behind him. Chief Manbula swiped at the spear with his hands
while taking a step backwards, then was suddenly shocked to find himself being
pushed forward at speed in the dangerous direction of the spear! Inga quickly
stepped aside, narrowly avoiding contact with Chief Manbula, who sped past him
sprawling to the dusty ground!
Chief Manbula rose to his hands and knees to gather himself, which
instantly caused him to think of the earlier comments to do so; he turned to
cast Saybe a seething glance of indignation, and was met with some curious
looks by all! Chief Manbula lifted himself up, shook the dust from off himself,
then casually turned to face his aggressor. Fist instantly picked up Becky, a
protective measure to try and ensure a peaceful resolution!
‘You push me,‘ Manbula stated to Fist, ‘then you pick up Becky before I
can push you back! I thought you was a brave warrior!’
‘I pushed my father, not chief,’ Fist stated trying to influence
a lesser offence, ‘as you was going to squash Becky,’ he added in his defense!
‘Why didn’t you just stop I, instead of pushing I?’ Manbula rightly
reasoned to Fist!
Fist just stood there, defiantly staring back at his father. Shirl
suddenly appeared, carrying a folded animal skin with food in it, which averted
Chief Manbula’s attention away from Fist, who was appreciative of the
diversion. Shirl casually strolled past Chief Manbula, indifferent to the
proceeds at hand, and approached Inga with a sparkle in her eye and a spring in
her step!
‘Inga,’ Shirl cheerily said as she offered out the parcel, ‘this is for
you, fill your hungry belly!’
‘I thank you, Shirl, may the sun and moon gods bless you,’ Inga
sincerely stated as he accepted the package of food.
‘Inga eat now,’ Manbula considerately stated, then angrily turned to
face Fist, barking as he pointed to the carcass, ‘go and take that dear to the
storage hut.’
‘Deer Inga’s kill, let him take it,’ Fist reasoned in protest as he cast
Inga a scornful glare.
‘I’ll take it,’ Inga politely gestured, feeling a little uncomfortable
at Fist’s distress, but not appreciating the sentiments in which it was
expressed!
‘Nonsense,’ Manbula barked, ’Fist will take it - WON’T YOU!’
Fist stared long and hard at his father before placing Becky down, then
reluctantly and pensively shuffled his way over to the deer, resenting the fact
of labouring for Inga! Fist cursed his father and Inga in his mind as he despondently
bent down to pick up the carcass, then as an act of strength rather than
obedience, grabbed it by its legs, heaved it over his shoulders, then
ambivalently marched away, feeling proud at his prowess, but indignant of the
task!
Inga relaxed from the tension the situation had arisen in him, feeling a
sense of relief that it now seemed resolved! He sat down where he was on the
ground with his legs folded, then opened up the folded skin before him, which
contained many strips of cooked meat, a few raw vegetables, an apple and a
pear. He picked up a piece of meat, then hungrily chewed on it, liking its
taste and texture. Chief Manbula walked over to him, then sat down next to him,
facing the group.
‘You’re a brave warrior killing big, tooth tiger,’ Manbula stated,
’tribe proud of you. The sun and moon gods are indeed watching over you. You
worry us coming back late. Meat nice, eh?’ He mentioned as Inga picked up
another piece of meat, ’you shouldn’t hunt so far away!’
‘It wasn’t so far,’ Inga stated before eating the meat in his hand , ’I
was hunting most of the day with no kill, then when I get a kill, it takes from
sunlight to moonlight to drag deer back, and I was in a tree for ages,’ he
added as he put the meat in his mouth.
‘You’re a skilled hunter, we’ll cook deer tomorrow,’ Manbula stated as
he scratched his chin beneath his short beard, then after a moment’s pause,
pensively added as he turned to face Inga, ’Fist should be more like you - you were
respectful to your father wasn’t you Inga?’
Inga nodded as he chewed on his meat, fondly recalling his father.
‘It was a bad time when your family died two summers ago,’ Manbula sadly
stated.
‘And Shy’s family,’ Inga interjected after swallowing the meat in his
mouth.
‘Yes, and Shy’s family,’ Manbula agreed, ‘and many more!’
‘Ashanti tribe were cursed with a terrible sickness that spread
quickly,’ Manbula stated recalling the somber occasion, ’may the spirits of
those that passed now protect us,’ he added as he placed his right arm around
Inga’s shoulders, gently comforting him for his loss.
Inga appreciated the gesture, and felt a great fondness for Chief
Manbula.
‘You have Shy now,’ Manbula stated as he withdrew his arm, ‘she and baby
are your family now.’
‘Ashanti tribe also Inga’s family,’ Inga stated, then after a moment’s
pause, added ‘baby will come soon, Shy’s belly is very big.’
‘May the sun and moon gods bless you with a boy,’ Manbula hopefully
stated as he looked up to the moon.
‘Shy’s belly is so big, it must be a boy,’ Inga reasoned as he picked up
a raw carrot, then took a bite of it.
‘Shy will make a great mother,’ Manbula commented with sincerity, ’and
you’ll make a great father.’
‘Where is Shy?’ Manbula asked as he scanned around the fire for a
possible glimpse of her: many villagers were sitting and standing close to it,
some discernable, lit up by the flames, with others silhouetted in the
moonlight.
‘She was tired and has gone to rest in our hut.’
‘Your bed will be warm then,’ Manbula reasoned with a smile, which
reminded him to ask, ‘what will you do with tooth tiger skin?’
Inga thought for a moment, grasping the sentiments behind the question,
and while he was going to give the fur as a gift to Shy, he thought it more
befitting now to offer it to the chief, who would wear the garment for prestige
and honour!
‘Consider it yours,’ Inga gladly stated, ’I’ll get some tribesmen to go
and retrieve the tooth tiger with I in the morning.’
‘Thank you Inga,’ Manbula said with a beaming smile as he briefly hugged
Inga, ’you’ve made Chief Manbula a very happy man. I will think of your bravery
each time I wear it.’
‘I’m happy to make you happy, and proud to make you
proud.’
‘I’ll feel proud to wear tooth tiger skin,’ Manbula stated, ‘I’ll come
with you in the morning, we’ll take ten of our strongest tribesmen with us,’ he
enthusiastically added as he stood up, ‘I’ll go and organise it now.’
Inga finished his carrot off as he watched Chief Manbula walking away,
who then stopped to speak to some tribesmen around the glowing fire. Shirl
promptly made her way over to Inga after seeing her father leave him, then sat
down in front of him.
‘Do you like the food?’ Shirl enquired.
‘Yes, I like the food,’ Inga replied as he picked up a large piece of
raw cauliflower, ’belly nearly full now.’
‘That’s good,’ she stated as she gazed at him, transfixed by his
handsomeness and muscular form, ’it’s not nice to be hungry.’
‘I wasn’t hungry for long,’ Inga said after swallowing the food in his
mouth, ‘what have you been doing today?’ He curiously added as he took another
bite of the cauliflower.
She enthusiastically relayed to Inga what she had been doing through the
day, leaving no small detail out! Inga listened with interest, acknowledging
what she was saying with the odd not of his head, in-between eating his food. A
moth suddenly flew into Inga’s face, startling him, causing him to drop the
piece of cauliflower. Shirl stopped what she was saying, then stared at him
amused for a short duration.
‘What are you smiling at?’ Inga knowingly asked, feeling coy.
‘I’m smiling at you, you fight big tooth tiger, yet scared of a little
moth,’ she stated, enjoying teasing him.
‘I’m not scared of little moth,’ Inga indignantly objected as he picked
up his cauliflower from off the dusty ground, then felt a little shame for
dropping it.
Inga dusted off the dirt with his hands, then looked up at Shirl, still
gazing at him amused.
‘Moths are blind and stupid,’ he stated, pondering the little creatures,
’they fly into your face and dangerously close to the fire flames.’
‘Are flies blind and stupid then,’ Shirl curiously asked in all
seriousness.
‘Butterflies aren’t blind and stupid,’ Inga responded, deep in thought.
‘I was asking about flies!’ Shirl protested, bemused at his response!
‘I know, but I was thinking about butterflies. They don’t fly in your
face, even when a wind blows them near you. And they float about so playfully,
not like moths who are clumsy!’
‘Butterflies are beautiful,’ Shirl pleasantly stated, ‘not like
moths, who are ugly,’ she added with a grimace.
‘Butterflies are pleasurable while moths are annoying,’ Inga stated,
then took a bite of his piece of cauliflower, chewed on it, swallowed it, then
added, ‘moths are ugly to us, but handsome and beautiful to each other.’
‘Are we handsome and beautiful to each other?’ She brazenly
asked.
Inga was taken aback at her directness, and momentarily shocked, causing
him to gape at her in disbelief: she was beautiful; long, straight,
black hair that glistened in the firelight; glossy eyes that had a look of
innocence; cute small nose; full, wide lips; slim frame. Inga gathered his
thoughts before replying:
‘You are very beautiful, and may be as tall as a tribesman, but
you’re still only young.’
‘I’m fourteen summer’s old,’ she protested.
‘I love Shy!’
‘You’re only nineteen winters old,’ She argued, disregarding Inga’s last
comment.
‘I love Shy,’ Inga sternly repeated, then quietly added ‘she’s having my
baby.’
‘I could have your baby,’ she seriously stated.
‘You’re like a sister to me,’ Inga responded, aggrieved at her
stubbornness, ‘and I love Shy,’ he adamantly added.
‘You love I too,‘ she poignantly stated.
‘As a sister,’ Inga reasoned, ’not as a partner.’
‘You already love me,’ she stubbornly reasoned in a hushed, sad voice.
‘As a sister,’ Inga argued, annoyed at her persistence.
‘I don’t like you anymore,’ Shirl sobbed, dejected, ‘and I hope another
tooth tiger eats you,’ she added as she smothered her face with her hands,
hiding herself from further embarrassment!
Inga stretched out his arm, then lay a comforting hand on her shoulder.
He stayed like that for a short duration, while he contemplated what to do,
when Shirl suddenly stood up.
‘I’m going to leave you now,’ she angrily stated as she wiped the
flowing tears on her wet cheeks with the backs of her hands, ‘and I hope to
never see you again,’ she venomously added as she stormed off in a huff,
momentarily hating Inga, and feeling deeply sorry for herself!
Inga watched her go, and felt distressed at her anguish, and worried how
she’d react on their next encounter, especially if he were with Shy! He ate
thereafter deep in thought, hardly noticing his surroundings as he stared
blankly into the space before him. Fist’s booming voice greeting Saybe and
Becky stirred him back to reality, and he contemptuously stared at him for his
lack of respect earlier. Inga picked up his apple, then took a large bite of
it, appreciating it quenching his thirst as juice dripped down his beard. Fist
glanced over at him staring, causing Inga to quickly look away feeling caught
out! Inga finished his apple, ate his pear, picked up the empty skin and his
spear, then stood up, bracing himself as he strolled over to confront Fist!
‘Why do you be disrespectful to your father, our chief,’ Inga loudly
stated as he approached Fist from behind, cutting him off from his conversation
with his mother.
Fist turned to face Inga with a malicious grin on his countenance, and
looked down on him with contempt as he said:
‘Why do you be disrespectful to me, you come over here and rudely
interrupt me while I’m speaking to my mother.’
Inga stared for a moment, dumbfounded and temporarily speechless at the
counter attack.
‘Sorry Saybe,’ Inga eventually said as he turned to face her, ‘I didn’t
mean to rudely interrupt you.’
‘But you did, didn’t you!’ Saybe sarcastically stated, sticking up for
her son.
‘You come over here questioning I,’ Fist seethed at Inga, ’when you have
no authority to. Don’t you know that I’ll be chief of Ashanti tribe one day,
you won’t question I then, will you!’
‘You’ll always be very
questionable,’ Inga quipped with a smile, then regretting his whit as Saybe’s
eyes bore into him.
‘You think you’re special because my father is fond of you! Well you’re
not. You’re a nobody to I, just a little bug I could squash at any moment,’
Fist stated, then bit a large bite out of a chunk of cooked meat he had in his
hand.
‘You should be grateful you have a father, as some others don’t,’ Inga
seriously stated.
‘Are you still mourning your father, then?’ Saybe sorrowfully asked
Inga, ‘he was a brave warrior. You take after him in many ways!’
‘I mourn remembering the good times,’ Inga sadly stated, ‘which
sometimes makes I sad and happy.’
‘And you’re sad now are you?’ Fist sarcastically asked Inga, ‘what makes
I sad is how you dote on my father as if he were your father, when he is
not!’
‘Leave Inga alone,’ Saybe interjected to Fist, empathizing with Inga,
‘he killed a tooth tiger today.’
‘And I’ll kill one tomorrow,’ Fist enviously stated as he took a bite
from his meat.
‘You won’t see a tooth tiger tomorrow,’ Saybe said after quickly
weighing up the likelihood.
‘I might,’ Fist stated with a mouthful of meat, ‘who knows when you
might chance upon one!’
‘Well if you do chance upon one, I’m sure you’ll be as brave as Inga
was!’ Saybe suggested.
‘I wouldn’t want to chance upon another one,’ Inga stated, ‘I’d be quite
happy to never see one again!’
‘Where’s Shy?’ Saybe asked Inga, ‘she was with you earlier!’
Fist tensely stiffened at the mention of Shy, then regained himself by
intently and hatefully staring at Inga.
‘She’s gone to our hut to rest.’
‘And so she should,‘ Saybe empathised, ‘especially to rest her feet. I
know what it’s like,’ she added as she cast Fist a scornful glance, and was
surprised to see him staring as he was!
‘Come on Becky,’ Fist said to his daughter, not wanting to share Inga’s
company for a moment longer ‘let’s take you to your mother who can put you in
bed.
‘Goodnight Becky,’ Inga said as he fondly looked down upon her, ‘sweet
dreams!’
Fist resented Inga talking to Becky, and was keen to hurry her along.
‘But I’m not tired father,’ Becky protested, ‘and I don’t want to go.’
‘Hug you grandmother and let’s go. Do as you’re told.’
She bade as she was told, but with deliberate mischievousness, as she
gave Saybe an extra ordinary long hug.
Fist waited with little patience, and grabbed her hand to lead her away,
regardless of them still hugging. Becky was reluctant to let go of her
grandmother, but slowly released her grasp as she was forcefully pulled away.
‘Goodnight Becky,’ Saybe said, surprised at Fist’s eagerness.
‘I don’t want to go father,’ she protested as she dug her heels hard
into the ground, stubbornly trying to prevent herself from being dragged away.
‘Goodnight mother,’ Fist called behind him as he walked away, feeling a
little guilty at having not hugged her in his haste, ’I’ll see you in the
morning.’
‘Bye,’ Saybe quietly uttered as she stared after them leaving while
gently waving to Becky, who turned frequently, despairingly looking back at
them.
They stood and sat there in silence, both thinking their individual
perspectives on reasoning Fist’s, rash behaviour! Shirl eventually spoke as she
looked up at Inga:
‘You’ll have a child of your own soon, and you’ll feel very protective
of your baby. And why shouldn’t you, as they are in essence you, or part of
you. Fist takes after my father in so many ways - may his spirit protect us -
and is not so much like his own father!’
‘And that saddens you?’
She stared at him, surprised by his comment, and wondered whether she
should take offence, but from what context, as she had been expressing
sadness!
‘Does it sadden I that Fist is like my own father?’ Saybe eventually
asked, curious to root out any negative sentiments.
‘No, does it sadden you that Fist is not like his own father.
‘Fist is himself, regardless of the similarities he expresses,’ she
sternly stated.
‘Fist will be chief one day,’ Inga said, then delicately added, ‘may he
become more like his father, who is a great chief to serve!’
Saybe felt obliged to agree, on a surface level, as the chief was her
partner, but in her mind she was cursing Inga’s expressive dislike for her son,
and now felt a little uncomfortable in his presence, causing her to irritably
fidget in silence. Inga saw that she was distressed, and casually looked about
to busy himself from the tense, awkwardness he felt. He felt a compelling need
to yawn, and stretch, but wrestled with this urge as he knew it was just a
habitual feeling he felt when he was ill at ease, and Saybe’s focus would once
again rest on him if he did so. He wanted to abruptly walk away, but didn’t
want to leave her upset with him, and thought long and hard what he could
perhaps say that might bring her back around to his favour! Saybe distracted
herself by idly fiddling about with her fingers, while blankly staring at them!
Inga cautiously watched her from the corner of his eye, absorbing her
uneasiness.
‘Shy should have a boy from her sheer size,’ Inga finally said, ‘and I
hope he’ll be as tall as Fist!’
‘Fist is tall,’ she proudly uttered while pondering his size, ‘and
broad.’
‘That he is,’ Inga agreed, pleased that she’d perked up a little ‘and
he’s strong.’
‘The strongest in the village,’ she enthusiastically added.
‘He loves Becky so much,’ Inga sincerely stated, pleased at his
progress, ’and you can see her face light up with joy when he plays with her.’
‘It’s nice to see isn’t it?’ She cheerfully stated with a warm smile,
’and I’m sure you and your child will have a similar bond.’
‘Thank you, Saybe, you’re a sweet person,’ Inga charmingly said, ‘and a
beautiful partner for our chief!’
‘I’m not so beautiful,’ Saybe modestly stated, appreciating the comment,
‘I’m old and past beautiful,’ she exaggerated as she acted coy.
‘I hope to live to your age one day, and if I do, I’m sure Shy will be
as beautiful as you are.’
‘Thank you, Inga, you’re a sweet person too,’ she reciprocated from one
of his previous comments, ‘I feel fortunate to have lived so long.
‘How many seasons are you?’ Inga curiously asked.
‘Forty eight springs.’
‘A good season to be born,’ Inga stated, ‘with mild weather and summer
on its way.’
‘Yes,’ Saybe agreed, ‘I do look forward to summer in spring,’ she enthusiastically
added.
‘And winter,’ Inga added.
‘What?’ Saybe asked, a little confused to his response.
‘We look forward to summer in winter, also,’ Inga clarified,
understanding her bemusement.
‘That we do. I don’t like winter at all.’
‘It’s a hardship for us,’ Inga stated, ‘a trying time to persevere.’
‘And endure,’ Saybe added as she hugged herself with a warm embrace,
envisaging and mimicking the cold in winter.
‘Before we know it, that cursed season will be upon us again,’ Inga
bitterly stated, ‘and there’ll be more deaths to encounter!’
‘Let’s not think of winter now,’ Saybe said after a long pause
deliberating the season, ‘let us think of summer and the happiness it brings.’
‘I am happier in summer,’ Inga stated, ‘I’m more cheerful and playful.’
‘And it’s nice to see, and can cheer others up too. I watch Becky for
ages sometimes, enjoying her frolicking. You‘ll experience that soon.’
‘Speaking of the baby,’ Inga responded as he put the skin in his hand
onto the tree trunk next to Saybe, ‘I better go and see how Shy is. May the sun
and moon gods bless you.’
‘And you,‘ Saybe said as Inga left to leave, ‘tell her I send warm
wishes.’
‘I will,’ Inga called back, ‘see you tomorrow.’
‘Yes, see you tomorrow,’ she mumbled under her breath as Inga faded into
the night.
Inga pulled the flap of animal hide to one side, and crouched through
the entrance to his and Shy’s hut. The hut was dark inside, and he took a few moments
to become accustomed to it. Slowly Shy’s sleeping form became distinguishable,
and he gazed lovingly down at her for a short duration while she slept. He
leant his spear up against the wall, then slipped under the furs next to Shy,
laying on a bed of straw with animal hides strewn over it. Shy had her back to
him, so he cuddled up close to her, lovingly wrapping his arm around her, which
caused her to stir. She lay there for a few moments liking his embrace,
absorbing his love, then smiled as she turned to face him.
‘Have you been lapping up your popularity?’ she teasingly asked.
‘Would you have I ignore everyone?’
‘Yes, if it means spending more time with I,’ she mocked, goading him.
‘You don’t mean that,’ he knowingly stated.
‘Do you think I’m mean and selfish wanting you all to myself?’
‘Not at all, I think it’s rather cute: an endearing quality. Do you
think I’m mean and selfish wanting to spend time with others?’
‘Only when you seem to forget about I waiting for you!’
‘But you’re always waiting for I!’
‘When you’re with I I’m not waiting - am I?’
‘You should try not to be so worried when I’m out hunting,’ he
conscientiously stated in all seriousness, recalling her wet cheeks, ‘which
causes you to be upset.’
‘You were late coming back,’ she innocently protested, then instantly
felt guilty for her earlier lie, but felt no shame for it, ’and I can’t help
but worry,’ she truthfully added.
‘Well, don’t worry too much,’ he stated, ’I’m a strong warrior.’
‘And I’m a strong worrier,’ she sincerely responded, ’and you could have
been killed by that tooth tiger!’
‘But you didn’t know that until I came back and told you.’
‘There are many predators to worry about while you’re hunting through
the forests alone.’
‘That may be so, but I have my trusty spear to defend myself with.’
‘And predators have big claws and teeth to attack with. Why do you have
to be so foolish and hunt alone at times?’
‘Sometimes I like my own company,’ he defensively responded, ’and
sometimes I like to think a lot instead of talking a lot.’
‘But you’re so stubborn. Are not four spears safer than one?’
‘It only takes one spear to kill an animal.’
‘But you are vulnerable on your own, and make yourself easy prey
to predators!’
‘I’m not easy prey,’ he objected, ‘which will be evidenced tomorrow when
I bring back the body of the tooth tiger.’
‘That tooth tiger could just have easily killed you, rather than you
killing it,’ she stated, deeply concerned for his safety.
‘And any roaming tooth tiger could easily kill any of us while we’re not
within the safety of our village, including you while you’re out bathing in the
river or searching for herbs and vegetables in the forest!’
Shy new how obstinate he was, and chose not to pursue the matter any
further that evening, choosing instead to try and focus on the positives of his
killing the tooth tiger.
‘We’re all so proud of you, you’re so brave,’ she sincerely stated in a
source of ambivalence as she gently caressed her hand over his exposed
shoulder.
‘I know you are. And I understand your worry, but where would we be if
we never ventured from the village because of the threat of predators!’
‘I’ve never seen a tooth tiger before, I’ve just heard many stories
about them.’
‘Well we’ll soon remedy that, I’m going with the chief and ten others to
retrieve the body in the morning.’
‘So I won’t see you all day tomorrow as well,’ she griped as she thought
how she’d pass through the next day without him, ‘I miss you terribly already.
At least I won’t worry so much tomorrow, with you having the security of others
protecting you.’
‘Enough about I, what about you? How have you spent your day?’
‘You know how I spend my days,’ she stated as she mischievously pushed
his shoulder back, ‘waiting and worrying for you!’
‘Besides that. What have you been doing and who have you been speaking
to?’
‘I’ve been doing little and talking a lot.’
‘That’s not much of an answer,’ he responded, feeling a little rejected
at her lack of enthusiasm.
‘Well, the question seemed to be asked blandly, and with insincerity!’
‘I’m sorry if it sounded as such,’ he sincerely apologised, ‘let I ask
the question again. How has your day been and with whose company have you
shared it with?’ he added in a warm, soft tone, trying to express himself in a
loving, caring way.
‘I understand you’re absorbed in your conquest with the tooth tiger, and
rightly and justly so,’ she stated as she tenderly held his hand, ’but I want
you to focus on I now, and not be distracted by your pride!’
‘I will,’ he said as he pulled her close to him, feeling her bulging
stomach pressing up against his as he lovingly hugged her, then conscientiously
added, ’I have much pride for you too you know!’
‘Which is nice, but one pride is different to the other pride.’
‘One pride, two pride, are they not both prides.’
‘One pride is for killing, and the other pride is for loving.’
‘You have pride for killing,’ he genuinely stated, ‘as you have pride
for I when I kill.’
‘But I’m not wholly focused on killing, just partially, while your
absorbed and distracted by it at the moment. Focus on loving while you’re with
I, and killing when you’re out hunting.’
‘I think of our love while I’m out hunting. I think of you constantly,
no matter where I am or what I’m doing!’
‘Have you thought to kiss I yet?’ She abruptly mentioned.
‘But we’ve been talking,’ he protested in innocence, yet still felt
guilty, ’and . . .’
Inga was cut short as Shy moved in to kiss him, passionately
moving her lips over his, expressing her deep affection for him. Inga
reciprocated, and got lost in the moment, as loving feelings burst forth from
inside him, overflowing from the outlet of his lips, expressing heart-felt
emotions and lustful inclinations! Shy felt his lust, but would not sexually
act upon it, choosing instead to calm him down a little.
‘You’re getting excited,’ she stated in earnest, ’and I’m heavily
pregnant! Go and throw yourself in the river and calm down,’ she teased, a jibe
to strike a chord with his arousal!
‘Woman, you’re cruel,’ he responded with understanding, ’I need to
bathe, but for cleanliness, and not for that reason!’
‘You sound like the chief saying ’woman’, ’she replied, ’can’t you think
of your own words to use!’
‘I’ll use I own words, and hopefully to better effect,’ he sincerely
stated with some phrases in mind to converse to her, ’but first you’ll have to
be nice to I.’
‘In what way shall I be nice,’ she responded, thinking the obvious from
his perspective, ‘would you have I lie here distressed while you take I! I’m
not in the mood, and I’m as big as an ox, feeling very unattractive!’
‘You’re beautiful, woman,’ he said in all seriousness, while also
teasing her, ‘and an ox is beautiful and handsome to other oxen.’
‘That’s a clever way to think,’ she acknowledged, ‘but are there no ugly
oxen for an oxen to think otherwise!’
‘Trust you to find a flaw in I reasoning. If I was on ox, I’d take
pleasure in seeing other females naked all day long!’
‘Oxen don’t dress, that’s true,’ she concluded, ‘but I now know you like
watching other female skin!’
‘Do you have to turn a nice sentiment into an argument,’ he griped,
annoyed at her negativity ‘I meant I’d enjoy watching you being naked
all day long.’
‘Well, you should express yourself with more clarity. Am I a mind reader
to understand your thoughts?’
‘But you understand I, and I devotion to you. And from that you should
not read negatives from positives in the things I say!’
‘Alright,’ she said, ‘let I think of something similar to say, and see
if you reason likewise to I,’ she added, toying around with similar expressions
to relate, after a little thought, she finally said, ‘I find men who treat
their women respectfully to be handsome in appeal! What do you think?’
Inga smiled as he solely thought of himself, taking the sentiments
singularly, instead of plural, and if his beaming face could light up the dark,
the hut would be lit up as if it were day! His misconception was based upon his
own respect to Shy, which held no bounds, so he was self-absorbed in his own
actions, and thought little of others of a similar essence!
‘I think you’re beautiful,’ he responded, catching up with his earlier
thoughts to use his own words, ‘and you shine radiance, bright like our god,
the sun. You are like a god to I, as I worship you in my prayers.’
‘You’re so clever with words,’ she admitted, feeling touched by the
expression, then because of his stubbornness in her reasoning previously, she
goaded with a smug grin, ‘what, only in your prayers am I worshipped!’
Copyright Andrew Stevenson
Copyright Andrew Stevenson
More! More! I enjoyed your story so far, Andrew! I've seen the skulls and canines of saber-toothed cats. I would not want to tangle with them! I had no idea what your novel might be about, but I certainly didn't expect this! Thanks you for reposting it! Take care, my friend!
ReplyDeleteGreetings Louise. Thank you for taking the time to read what I've wrote so far. I lost a chapter and a half of it, and don't know where? I've been writing another novel about drug dealing, of which I'm thirteen chapters in. I have some old school friends who have served time for drug dealing and they enlightened me, so I just went with their flow of what they know. I've posted the first six pages, and it's called 'Love And Shame'. The piece is exaggerated fiction. Glad you liked what I've wrote so far with this novel. I'm gutted to have lost some of it! You have an insight on Sabre Tooth Tigers - big cats. Blessings to you my friend. Love love, Andrew.
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