God
said to lonely Adam
I
will make you Eden,
But
you are forbidden
To
have your own wisdom.
You
shouldn’t eat from the tree
That
I have indicated to thee
As
it will make me unhappy
To
see you understand like me.
If
you eat its fruit you’ll die
So
do not even bother to try,
As
I will roar from the sky
With
a wrath of goodbye.
God
made Adam his wife, Eve,
But
she was to unwisely deceive,
As
the serpent made her believe
She
should eat the fruit with greed.
They
now new good from evil
Which
gave them a bitter-chill
As
they hid from God’s call
As
they were revealing their all.
©
Andrew Stevenson 26/02/2018
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Excellent ppoem Andrew. sometimes is not good to have a second bite of the cherry as I found out.
ReplyDeleteTake care.
Yvonne.
Greetings Yvonne. Thank you for your lovely words. Sorry you've experienced some hardship with your previous partner. :( . Blessings to you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
DeleteUnfortunately, God's "children" often behave like children.
ReplyDeleteGreetings Susan. You are not wrong. Blessings to you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
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